The human race
Must think of the future
Because the face of the future
Is the the future we face.
The dream is in our head
And ahead it’s the dream
Although it might seem
It was the life that we led.
The face of time
Is the time that we face
It brings us to the place
Where the future is sublime.
You put how many chiasms in your poem ? 5 ? Well done !
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I think I did 3. One for each stanza. This was a tough assignment.
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Indeed. And you did a wonderful job. I love your poem.
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Thank you!
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You incorporated all of the challenges! Excellent!
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Thank you!
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lovely
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Thanks Lynz!
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This has a lovely flow to it. Well done. 🙂
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Thank you Viva!
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