Life kicks us sometimes
Eight or ten times
Death makes us sad
But anger makes us bad
It happens out of the blue
When we haven’t a clue
It just bursts out
And then we shout
They say it’s from grief
And it feels like relief
But then we feel badly
When we’ve treated others madly.
Love the country sayings
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Thanks! I tried to add a little humour (and a metaphor).
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It worked. The metaphor game is a different thing. If you want one they hide from you. It’s like a joke, you know a good one and there’s no one there to tell. Then you forget the punchline.
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True!
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Cathy, sometime plese tell me Justine’s story. I read that you are hurting. I understand hurting. Writing helps. Good for you!
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I’m writing a book about her life. Some posts here are about her story. Writing definitely helps. Thank you.
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It’s good. And it’s good for you.
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Thanks Maddy.
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Clever poem…..liked it….thanks for stopping by my blog….I will enjoy following yours…have a great weekend..Kat
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Thanks!
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Great title. Thanks for letting feelings say what they must. ❤
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I’m getting good at letting it out these days.
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Excellent Opinions. Appreciate it!
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bookmarked!!, I like your site!|
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Thank you!
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